Part 111- Sample Answers to 800/4 (Question 2)

The second question for this paper requires a student to write at least 350 words, thus one needs to plan to answer in the tight time frame given - this obviously needs a lot of practice!

To answer this question (refer to notes in Part 1) you need : to determine the format required.

Para. 1    : introduction and theTHESIS statement ( for Band 3 and above).
Para.2 -4:Topic sentence,elaboration and examples.
Last Para: Conclusion- reaffirm thesis.

The following scripts follow these guidelines.

The above script is well-written as the student seems to have a flair with the english language. Very seldom that I come across such expressions from my students, for eg. here :

" Wow them with your abilities....Dazzle them with your communicating skills....."

To have written so well.. obviously she must be well- read- kudos to her!!! But then even if  english is not your cup of tea, you can still do well in this section if you just follow the guidelines given. The following script is a good example.

Hope this sample answers would give you some insight to what is required to score in this paper.

Happy writing!!!